It is rare to see contemporary modern African writers
addressing the issue of economic dire and hardship; anguish of being away from
one’s kin, societal doom coupled with pain arising from missing some one loved,
without being political. It is rare to see African writers being creatively
aware of another platform of expressing the socio-political scenario of African
society without being biased either by building the universal idea of their
works on bad governance or lack of trust in leadership and followership which
has always being the order of the day in the new dimension of African
literature. I believe Toni Kan has brought the best by bringing his pen out of
the dusty and boring general status qou of African literature being subjected
to politics and squeezed his stream of consciousness for new juice of knowledge
to present reality without being gullible of politi-ture which younger writers inherited from foremost African
writers.
Toni Kan’s
song of absence and despair is a realistic collection of poem that laments for
those who are being forced out of their land because of unbearable economic hardship
and could not return back. Rather, they get united again to their families and
friends through the space less window of social network and cash exchange
western union, which are not enough to re-learn love back between husband and
wife, father and children, mother and children who are, for a long period of
time being forcedly made to gaze each side afar by hard-bitten inevitable
torment of poverty, and there by aims at snatching hope from the dreadful jaw
of despair.
The poem is
full of memories of manifold moments- love, absence, despair from the first
poem ‘night falls gently like leaves in an autumn’ to the last one ‘a very
young girl with enormous breast. Kan ,having got the ideology from a Chilean
poet, Pablo Neruda, he is of the fact
that there is need for portrayal of love’s torment which almost all parts of
the globe are subjected to. The poems portray love as full of agonies, bitter
melodies and baked moments, especially in a situation where lovers who are expected
to be enjoying the game of Cupid find each other a lonely minstrel on deserted
street of loneliness without any help. No wonder, ‘the night falls like leaves
in an autumn’ expresses loneliness as an element of despair.
In ‘want to see my
dad’, and ‘loneliness has grown muscle’, the poet recalls the fall-out of one’s
lover absence as being heart-piercing. He says:
I mourn my
husband
Though he is
not dead
The distance
between us
Yawns like a
graveyard
I am wet with tears
Throughout the poem, I wonder why the poet assumes the
responsibility of being the victim of absence and despair; Perhaps to bring the
pains of absence close to common man. There is undisputable fact that the
collection addresses the issue of immortality and death with ‘all I have now
are memories’ and one day gone, and i am not tatter’ as copious instances.
Though eye may be made far from eye by death, the memories of yesterday and
last night when cordiality was the song of village cannot be forever kept in
oblivion. And for those whose days are gone, their memories shall ever be
caressed in the vessel of remembrance till eyes shall meet again on the lane of
togetherness.
The
collection is a memories laced with bitter and distasteful melody filled with
powerful imageries that wake slumbering passion and dying affection from being
transient but eternal. Laconicity is employed in the poems. The fact that its
language is simple, direct and straight-forward amounts it to accolades. I see
the collection as a clarion call to those buffeted by economic shipwreck and
melt-down with sense of consciousness for understanding among one another. What
really impresses me most is the sequential arrangement of the poems with the
theme built around coherence and cohesive subject matter.
Contrarily,
there are still many lapses which call for other-side of the collection. It is
not only a bringer of tears but also the killer of hope. Though the it aims at
snatching hope from the jaw of despair, throughout the poem, there is no place
for hope to be seen, rather pains, tears, despair, nostalgic moments that evoke
fears make the pages of the collection busy. We should also note that the
collection is a similitude replica of Pablo Neruda’s ‘song of and love’ making
it sounds plagiaristic. Lastly, there is no mutual correlation and
corroboration between its title and the circumventing aim of the book. They are
contradictory and ironic!
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